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PostSubject: *Open* (Redone)State Of Mind    *Open* (Redone)State Of Mind  EmptySun Oct 17, 2010 6:38 pm

Jack, sits on top of a rooftop. Flicking his gun up and down, pretending to shoot it.
When he heard sounds and screams coming from the streets, he looked all around and to /his right a tall man in a motorcycle attire was terrorizing, civilians and pedestrians.
"What the fu** Is this, sh**?"Jack stood up and jumped of the rooftop, and loaded his gun. "Time to kill some scum!" Said Jack, as he reached the ground landing perfectly on his feet, he then locked onto his target, "Here, we go!"
Jack, started shooting, carefully dodging civilians, and also, pinpointing Drake as he shot.
Drake turned around slowly and locked his eyes on Jack, while jack still shooting yelled across form all the destruction "What's you're name!?" Drake charge towards Jack, with a look of sinister evil on his face, he jumped into the air, and kicked Jack in the face. Jack flew across flew the scene and landed on a rusty candy-red car. Surprisingly he did not die, because he got right back up. "Lets go!"
Said Jack, as he took off, his overcoat, and went into a standard karate position.
He let out a fearsome, yell as he ran after Drake. He then dropped down, and tripped him then punched his face thrusting Drake to the ground. Drake then counter attacked, by back kicking, Jack into the air. He started to levitate for about a minute. He then fell down to Earth, and Drake caught im by the leg, and Jack punched Drake hard and the face and shattered his nose. Drake let Jack, go and let out a yelp of pain. Jack landed and then picked his gun back up. He then jumped in the air this time he started floating for about 1 minute. He then started shooting at, Drake. Expecting to fall Jack stopped levitating but instead he started to float, he was so amazed that he fell to the ground. Drake had gotten ahold of a civilian, and to his surprise Jack saw his best friend getting her head ripped off. "Jackie!!" Yelled Jack. He dropped his gun and started to cry, not knowing anything else but his best-friends death he started to float, but this time he did not fall, dried tears rolling down his face he said "You'll pay for what you've done!" He then let out a fearsome yell. His muscles started to bulk up, and the fabric of his clothes started to rip, more and more into tiny pieces
Jack then ran after Drake, and decked him so hard, that his face got badly bruised. Jack continued to punch and punch until Drake stopped resisting, he wasn't dead but he was knocked out. In a matter of seconds Drake got back up and grabbed Jack by his neck, and squeezed it as hard as he could. "P-please...." pleaded Jack but it was too, late Drake had killed Jack, "Heh-heh-heh! Drake let out a fearsome cackle, and then continued his chaotic rampage.....
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538 words equals....
1000 PL.
Jack is dead so he starts at King Yemnas Place.
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