State Of Mind

Sitting there on a dull rock, Drake had a look of blank expression on his face. He started fidgeting around with his feet, tapping them rapidly.
"What to do, what to do?"
Thought Drake as he fidgeted about. A sudden look of shock as a large shadow appeared above him. "Oh shi-"
A large Green, dinosaur roared in front of him.
Drake jumped up into the air the air to see his opponent.
"Finally breakfast's arrived!" Said Drake.
Drake balled up his fist and charged towards his enemy,letting out a fearsome yell.
He jumped into the air directing his first hit directly to the dinosaur's nose. He quickly
grabbed ahold of the beast as it fell form the impact of Drake's hit and found his way to the top of beast's head. He then ran across to the dinosaur's neck, rapidly being thrown around, he grabbed ahold to one of the dinosaurs spikes and thrusted him self to the beast's neck.
And he punched his beast's medulla oblongata and broke the dinosaurs neck, messing up the tiny stem of the dinosaur's brain. The dinosaur and Drake fell to the ground,. Drake ripped the head off the beast and proceeded to cut him up. He found a nice sharp rock and started cutting the dinosaurs skin exactly the same each slice. 2 hours later when he was done he made a fire with some twigs. And started his his meal.
"Finally this should be good."
Some time later Drake finished his meal, and went back to the dull rock, and then continued to tap his feet rapidly. Suddenly a man on a motorcycle drove by catching Drake's attention. Drake ponced onto the motorcyclist, killed him and took his, shoes with white straps, baggy jeans and motorcycle jacket. He bent down examining the object as of which seemed strange to him. Just then another motorcycle passed Drake. Drake quickly hid the body and proceeded to catch up to the biker.
"Hey you!" Yelled Drake. The motorbike stopped his motorbike and turned back. "Yes?" Drake walked up the the biker. "Whats that thing over there?"
The bikers eyes watered up and he started laughing hysterically.
"Ha-Ha! I-It's a m-mot-motorcycle!!"
Drake punched the bike in his face breaking and locking his jaw.
"How do you use it?!" Yelled Drake.
The biker struggled and finally opened his mouth.
"Presh, da redsh buton"
"Thanks."
Drake hopped on the motorbike and pressed the red button, and the bike boosted.
Drake moved left and right stumbling trying to take hold of the bike. He then crashes into a tree, near the border to The City. "Aughh" Two guards, saw Drake, and rushed to him .
"Call the paramedics! We have a moto incident!
Drake then woke up before anything could happen and killed both the guards, seeming as if he was possessed Drake runs at high speeds to the wastelands, and tho the place where he fought the Tuffle. Drake then dropped instantly.
Some time later....
"Oogh! Aggh! Ek!"
"Oogh! Aggh! Ek!"
"Oogh! Aggh! Ek!"
"Oogh! Aggh! Ek!"
Drake tossed and turned around then
Drake woke up, to see a bunch of Tribesmen behind him. They were making strange Gorilla sounds "Eaahh! Myah Myahh!"
Drake looked puzzled. "Who are you?" The Tribesmen stood silent. Drake then mocked what they said. "Eaahh! Myah Myahh!" the Tribesmen responded back " Whoo! Whoo! Gack!" Drake stood up. "Who are you?" He said slowly. Then pushing past the Tribesmen a tall broad figure, greeted Drake. "Hello there. Excuse my brothers and sisters. They are still learning. My name is Kahaled. What is yours?"
Drake face looked shocked. "D-Drake."
"Aghh! Aghh! Aghh!''
Chanted the excited Tribesmen And then they continued on, and on and on..
"Aghh! Aghh! Aghh!''
"Aghh! Aghh! Aghh!''
"CEASE!" Yelled Khaled. And the Tribesmen stopped. " Return!" Said Khaled. And they did.
Drake looked like he had seen a ghost. "Where am I?" Said Drake. "You do not remember young one?'' Drake didn't say a word. "This is where you were fought that green haired, mongrel. Carter I believe. We have him prisoner here. " Drakes eyes filled with rage, as he pushed past Khaled destroying everything in his path until he saw a jail hut. "You..." Said Drake. Carter looked up "You..."

To Be Continued......

That's 712 words, so
5000 to pl so my pl is 6000 powerlevel.

its only 716 words- so its only 5000 to your pl-
Since your new and you could've made a small mistake I'm just going to keep an eye on you.
You already put your powerlevel there, which is not how it goes.
You wait for me or Ant to accept this trainingspost.

Also it seemed really weird and creepy and I didnt get half of the story but I'm just going to accept it.

Accepted
Add 5000 to your PL
And next time wait for a staff member.

Sorry, and I know you don't get it. You must read about the character first. The tribe took him in and nursed him back to health when he left them. Carter is the one who almost killed him and he has been looking for him. Thats the story so far. And sorry again.

Alright,
By the way, dont forget that your char already had 1000 PL
So you can add the 5000 to it.

And I'm not new I've been here since the begging un 2009. And thank you I will

Oh alright , so you want me to give you a WL?

No! No I dont.

Also a tip for the future, you repeat a lot of sentences...
e.g. Ohh ahh eck.

Don't do this in future as its the same as writing "one two three four five etc"
Just doing it to lengthen your post.

In future don't do that.

Ok, sorry.